starting over dream
mind wanders its corridors
which door to open
memories boxed up.
shelves stacked, cupboard closed
don’t open that one
a hint on calm breeze
breathing slows, shoulders down
whispers ‘by the sea’
The Daily Post – Writing Challenge : Starting Over


Oooo. I like this one. This give me the chills lie all the dreams. Good.
Alice
Thank you so much Alice
So cool to hear that!
Beautiful imagery. I can feel this.
Thanks Maggie
Seems it’s easier for me to speak in few words
Goosebumps.
my work here is done
Beautiful – and a great post for the challenge
Thanks so much Dianne
breathing slows, shoulders down
whispers ‘by the sea’
Damn. So good.
I can’t do my smile any bigger but it is !!
Thank you.
I second Tim. The last stanza took my breath away and relaxed my shoulders. Love it, Annie.
Thank you
Very nice. Love the images.
Thanks so much Padraig
Really nice, Annie. The last stanza gave me chills. Someday you will live by the sea, yes?
I hear the whisper
One day Maddie..