winter’s clinging

 

Haiku Heights Saturday Challenge – Shroud

 

snow in the mountains

double doonas on mother

winter shroud remains

 

 

 

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13 thoughts on “winter’s clinging

  1. First time here. You’ve written a wonderful spiritual haiku.

    Chevrefeuille a.k.a. Basho2012

    Ps. If you like writing haiku …please visit my daily haiku meme Carpe Diem. The url is: http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.com

  2. Hey, no fair – you made me work for this one. Never heard the word doonas before and I had to google the meaning and then reread your Haiku. NOW, I totally enjoyed the picture you painted with the words.
    Thanks for a new word in my vocabulary! Tonight I shall shroud myself in my own doona!

    • bodhisattvaintraining

      Ha ha 🙂 I got a new word today too from someone else’s post…
      What do YOU call a doona???

  3. Yes – I wish all this cold would go away! 😉

    • bodhisattvaintraining

      We’ve ended up having a beautiful day today but the last couple were ridiculous!

  4. That chill in the bones that just won’t go away.

  5. I missed this one! Very nice haiku. Cold!

    • bodhisattvaintraining

      It was crazy cold! We’re in spring but it snowed again in the mountains west of Sydney for two days!

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