when one door closes…or you wish it would

 

starting over dream

mind wanders its corridors

which door to open

 

memories boxed up.

shelves stacked, cupboard closed

don’t open that one

 

a hint on calm breeze

breathing slows, shoulders down

whispers ‘by the sea’

 

The Daily Post – Writing Challenge : Starting Over

 

 

 

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16 thoughts on “when one door closes…or you wish it would

  1. Oooo. I like this one. This give me the chills lie all the dreams. Good.
    Alice

  2. Beautiful imagery. I can feel this.

  3. Beautiful – and a great post for the challenge πŸ˜‰

  4. breathing slows, shoulders down
    whispers β€˜by the sea’

    Damn. So good.

  5. Very nice. Love the images.

  6. Really nice, Annie. The last stanza gave me chills. Someday you will live by the sea, yes?

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