the sun rises





My first attempt at this challenge, at the prompting of yepirate…


Prompts have me thinking of summers past. Not sure if it’s bright days and heat I’m craving, or a longing for old loves, physical anticipation…will summer come again to this old heart, this bedroom?


sun rises daily

intense heat not guaranteed

smiles follow sunshine




13 thoughts on “the sun rises

  1. very interesting and well done 🙂

  2. Live in the moment my friend. You will be much happier that way. It took me till now to realize that principle. Om tat sat om.

  3. unfetteredbs

    Heat would be nice…

  4. I like it, and salute your poetary prowess! I’m looking for heat too, sweating in the upper 30s of a Burmese June, trying to trust that I’ll find what I need, if not what I want. Sure would be nice to have both!

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