I do like to be beside the seaside

 

 

 

 

waves of salt, breath in

 

slow breath out, mind empties and

 

thoughts evaporate

 

 

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23 thoughts on “I do like to be beside the seaside

  1. A clever allusion – well done.

  2. Love this, I went to the beach yesterday and yes those words captured my moment, awesome.

  3. thoughts evaporate . WOW! your haiku is very well-written. Hats off.

  4. They do that. That’s what days at the beach are for!

  5. i wish i could do it…
    my thoughts have become heavy now…thanks for the wonderful haiku

  6. That’s the best part: thoughts evaporate. . . and you just exist, completely in the moment.

  7. I will be seaside on Friday….hallelujah!!!

  8. “Thoughts evaporate”
    That’s so thoughtful and beautiful! 🙂

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