Carpe Diem’s tan renga challenge – I hear you speak

 

CARPE DIEM TAN RENGA – MOONDUSTWRITER’S ”I HEAR YOU SPEAK”

 

I hear you speak

waves tumble half a world away

conch’s song          (Lesley Moon)

 

I hear all of your heart beats

I gave you the name they use          (bodhi)

 

 

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10 thoughts on “Carpe Diem’s tan renga challenge – I hear you speak

  1. What an extraordinary continuation of this Tan Renga Bodhi. I like the spiritual meaning in it.

  2. It really is beautiful. Knowing each voice like a mother knows her children.

  3. absolutely stunning completion! I could feel deep emotion…

  4. beautiful completion ☺

  5. I find the continuation a little bit enigmatic which is what I like the most… those voices…

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